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:icon123ren321:
123REN321 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Where is the teacher? lol
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Elaine-Eden Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Ach so, Strudl ist ihr Name...?! o__O' Das ist n Spitzname, oder??? Das arme Kind! Kein Wunder, dass die so aggro ist. Bei dem Namen wrd ich auch ausrasten xD
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AnimeGirlXxXmanga Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG THERE'S A TOMBOY IN HERE!
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:iconstephaniescarlet:
stephaniescarlet Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
AHA!!!! I NEW IT WAS A GIRL!! >8D
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:iconi-am-tsukiko:
i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Student General Artist
i love the tomboy!
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:iconlila-varney:
Lila-Varney Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
Ohhh Im in love, Juniiiiii :heart:
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011
juhuu, i'm glad you like her *o*
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Tadpole7 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
Very nice inks. :)
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:iconnortstar:
Nortstar Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
woh..Strudl is scary

but i like that page :) Nadja have nice expression on tird panel :D
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:iconstereophonia:
Stereophonia Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011  Student General Artist
*O* !!! OMFG I love her :heart:
Great job *O*
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011
Thank you. I'm glad you like her ^^
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Professional General Artist
As much as I love your art, I am having a hard time figuring out how to read this. Left to right? Right to left? The first and last panel read right to left but the middle two are sequenced so it looks like it's left to right. I have kind of had this problem with the flow of your pages since the beginning of this comic. You might consider reading up on sequential art techniques, because your art is great but, to be honest, your storytelling is a bit weak in comparison.
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
it's all japanese reading style but you are right there are also exceptions. if the speech bubble is far upon the other it is read first though.
i think about adding a tutorial with some helpful advices soon ^_^ :hug:
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JadineR Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011
Hah, you know I have this same trouble with her pages too ^^; I think she mentioned once that it reads right to left. It wouldn't surprise me because almost every single German homemade manga reads right to left XD *eyes her books*
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011  Professional General Artist
I think her biggest problem is that she has characters facing the right side. There is a pretty basic rule in comics that, for the most part, you don't have characters facing the opposite direction of the page flow unless they are leaving the panel or are looking regrettable. I only do it, occasionally, when there isn't a lot of action in a scene and I'm tired of characters all looking left. I like Naschi's old-school artwork but she doesn't place word balloons and characters very well. It's actually a really common problem with Western artists doing manga-styled comics, since they naturally read left to right. You have to train yourself out of it, like I had to do when I came to Japan. On the rare occasion I DO make an English-language comic, I will have to remind myself "left to right, left to right" when placing characters and coming up with layouts. This is why I always say if you aren't doing a comic in Japanese, don't draw right to left. There's just no reason to, but I see so many people do it. I bought the first volume of Carciphona by a DA artist as well as Sacred by a European DA artist and both were, for some reason, right to left. I do right to left because I actually release my comics in Japanese originally.

Glad I'm not the only one having some trouble reading these pages ^^;
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JadineR Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011
I agree with everything. :nod: The funny thing about all this, is that supposedly if a German comic is in manga style and does read left-to-right --as would be normal in Germany naturally-- nobody will read it and it'll lose money because it's not "authentic manga" enough D: I read this somewhere once and I couldn't believe it. I felt bad for German manga-influenced artists. This would explain a lot though.

For about 2-3 years when I was in jr. high, I did my pages right-to-left (oh, young weeaboo XD). The funny thing about that, is that after another couple of years I drew left-to right, because well duh, we read left-to-right over here. However I would almost always make the mistake of arranging a page that would be correct in right-to-left but not the other way around :XD: To this day I still have to check myself so I don't make that mistake.
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Professional General Artist
That's too bad about German artists! I actually debated flipping FaLLEN so it read left to right in Enlish but it seemed like too much work...
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Blooming-Pinguicula Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally thought that was a guy ... eheheh ....
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addiction2anime Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011
I must say, you are extremely talented! These manga pages never cease to amaze me! The art is brilliant and I enjoy reading them! I can't wait for the next one!!!!!
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011
Thank you very much for nice words *o* :heart:
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addiction2anime Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011
Puh-lease! You so deserve way more praise than that...unfortunately, your epicness has left me speechless...
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011
wow, thank you very much *o*
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:iconvichu-san:
vichu-san Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Very nice work Naschi! Your style is elegant and clean!
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:iconamberrant:
Amberrant Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a girl! :dummy: I was right :icondivaplz:
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011
hehe XD
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:iconblaue-rose:
Blaue-Rose Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Wow... O_o
Strudl is so mean... O_o
Erik is a hero~!!! X3
Nice job... X3
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trickster-eyes Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
I just started reading your manga and I'm so excited to read it every Wednesday!!! :D ...I have to admit I'm a little sad that Strudl is a girl... I was hoping for a love triangle <3 (Since it seems like the blonde guy from the first few pages will be a love interest) :)
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Hehe, that sounds nice. Thank you very much ^__^
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:iconmizukatsu:
MizuKatsu Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
ohh how great work n-n <3
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:iconveruxka009:
Veruxka009 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011  Professional General Artist
Love it! Poor Juni! What a first day!!!
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Ah, thats right <.<
Poor little Juni.
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:iconveruxka009:
Veruxka009 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011  Professional General Artist
My first days aren't like that!!:D
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:iconharrypotter98:
HarryPotter98 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Awesomeeee *___*
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Thank you ^o^
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T2T8-ToOTiGht Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
awesome page
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:iconoceans-art:
Oceans-Art Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
she is crazy _'
love this page! :heart:
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Yes, i think the same >.<
Thank you ^^
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