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Chapter 02 Page 11 by Naschi Chapter 02 Page 11 by Naschi
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:iconaozumi-natty:
Aozumi-Natty Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Juni...I'm..I'm pregnant !
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:iconsugomon:
sugomon Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
But... I love you! Marry me! *melts*
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
XD XD
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:icontissamendes:
Tissamendes Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student
he is going to say that he is a vampire? :iconbigeyesplz:
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
haha that is funny I like it ! XD Bunny Emoji-18 (Shower Love) [V1] 
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Tissamendes Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Student
:iconlooolplz:
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:iconelaine-eden:
Elaine-Eden Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Alter, die Laternen und so ö__________ö I like!!! >//////< Sieht voll gut aus!!
Du machst Fortschritte bei den Proportionen :D
Hihi wie er unten rechts guckt xDDD
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Tadpole7 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
Very nice page with some lovely inks.
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:icontheaimandps:
THEAIMANDPS Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG!!! ots get more and more interesting!!! please upload the next page too i cant wait XD your drawing just adds so much beauty to the page! :D
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SakuraBlossomHime Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i just started reading and i love it so much! :iconiloveyouplz: i wish i had your talent :iconpandarunplz:
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
Wah. thank you :heart:
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:iconsakurablossomhime:
SakuraBlossomHime Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome~
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:icongigibell:
Gigibell Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lovely art as always and the story is getting really interesting! Im so curious as to what will happen :la:
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
Thank you. I'm happy that you like it ^o^
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kitsunekeyblader Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
He's about to tell her that he's her bodyguard from the future, and that Future!Juni sent him to protect her because a rebel group sent an assassin back in time to kill Past!Juni before she gets the to save and eventually rule the world! :dummy:

Past!Juni will eventually start asking questions about what her future self is like, and Erik tells her about all the good she's done and how peaceful the future is, but the war-mongering rebels threaten to destroy everything Future!Juni's done with their terrorism and stuff.

Eventually Past!Juni meets Sho the rebel assassin who tells her a COMPLETELY different story, and she finds out that Future!Juni is actually a ruthless dictator and that the rebels want to kill her now before she starts WW3 and takes over the world with her crystal powers. The title of the manga is actually a line directly from some of the Pro-Juni propaganda in the future!

The rest of the manga will be of her trying to figure which is really the truth, it will end with Past!Juni showing signs of her Start of Darkness when Erik dies from a mortal injury and having proclaimed his love for her. He didn't really mean it though, because it was a part of his orders given to him by Future!Juni...
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
lol ^___^
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:iconkitsunekeyblader:
kitsunekeyblader Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Yay, I amused someone! :dummy: I hope I didn't spoil too much of the plot, Ms. Naschi, but I just couldn't help telling people! :D
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
haha no it was really fun to read this ^^ it reminds me a bit of Terminator XD
Perhaps you are right in some ways ;)
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:iconkitsunekeyblader:
kitsunekeyblader Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
Aww, thank you! Oh wow, you're right it is a bit like Terminator. LOL

Oh? Hehehe, now I can't wait to see what you mean! X3
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i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student General Artist
WHHHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!!?
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:iconusa-bell:
Usa-Bell Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student Artist
But... But... BUT!!!!! What!!!!!!
You cant do this to meh!!!!!!! Q^Q
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:iconsayurei:
Sayurei Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
You know it's a good story when you're suddenly in denial of not getting to read the next page.
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fluoshrimp Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutt!!!!! D:
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:iconm-u-ll-e:
m-u-ll-e Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nashi-maus! Hatte ich die Seite schon gesehen? das raster sieht einfch bombig aus? Hast du das per Hand gemacht?
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
Ich glaube, die Seite ist neu. Welches Raster meinst du?
Die hell dunkel verläufe?
Wenn du die Bäume meinst, die zeichne ich aller selber XD
Dankeschööön ^^
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m-u-ll-e Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ich meine alles, denn die Seite sieht in der Gesamtkomposition toll aus! Das due die Bäume selber zeichnest, weiß ich ja. Die sind immer so schön bei dir.
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:iconnephiam:
Nephiam Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
But...? BUT...? ;A;
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:iconangelthehuman:
AngelTheHuman Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
much.. find.. out.. what.. HES GOING TOO TELL HER!!!!
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:iconharanuva:
Haranuva Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
gaaah tell her what TELL HER WHAT!!!? :iconpetrifiedplz:
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:iconamberrant:
Amberrant Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hanging! That I am.
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:iconsimoneevee8:
simoneevee8 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
But what?!
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:iconsolya199:
Solya199 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
I think he will say: But sometimes I dream of you or you appear in my dreams...or something like that :) Just thought that because Naschi wrote that the girl had dreams too. And so I think it is evident that the guy has dreams too, but not about a disaster, like the girl, but about the saviour...Juni :) Am I right ? :D
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
Wow, thank you very much for great words.
I'm totally happy about it ^__^
It sounds very interesting, but its different from the real story.
But i like your words :heart:
Thank you very much ^______^
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Glamrgrl104 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ooo must read more!
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:iconcalyses:
Calyses Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Flashback?
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:iconmegapinkfreak:
megapinkfreak Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D: Such a cliff hanger!!!!! I want to know what he is going to say!!! Great manga by the way! ^^
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Parikuu Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
Oh my gosh! But what *A* haha! Such a cliff hanger!! I'm glad I started reading this! I don't know why it took me so long to finally do so *.* Your manga is so good! And it's very interesting! I look forward to the updates! I love Juni XDD
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
I'm very happy abot that you like it. Thank you ^^
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:iconnortstar:
Nortstar Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
wow.. next page will be awsome ^^
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Nafanua123 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
BUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icontinsel2:
Tinsel2 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
Such suspense! Gosh, I really love your comic!
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NinjaNeko52-4 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thyis is amazing. Some of the grammar is wrong (But not much, It still reads okay =^-^=) but it's stall amazing!!
I look foeward to seeing more!! >¬<
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JunkoSaotome Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good! Very good! I love this! Love the art

Some of the dialogue is a bit awkward in English:
"If only I know what hppened back then..." should be "If Only I knew what happened back then." Since he's talking about 'back then', the 'know' should be 'knew' since it's past tense.
"I probably have an amnesia" 'an' should be taken out to make the sentence just a little less awkward
"When they found me I had a big wound at my head" should be "When they found me, I had a big wound on my head"
"after All it is true he got injured..." Personally, i'd change it to "That right, he was badly injured..." but that's just my thought bubble.

I know English isnt your first language so I dont write this comment as being a 'hater' or anything. I just wanted to point out some English mistakes to help a bit. I hope you dont see me as bashing your story because I honestly do love your story!
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:iconnaschi:
Naschi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
Hello,

thank you very much for your helpful adjustmenst. Its very better.
I am deeply grateful for you great help. And don't worry about it ;D
:heart:
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:iconjunkosaotome:
JunkoSaotome Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay :D Had to make sure and you're welcome
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Veruxka009 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
The rest? Where is the rest??? Ahh you leave us in this spectation...!!!
I love your pages!!!:D:D
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:iconmackyca:
mackyca Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I WANT NEXT PAGE RIGHT NOW XD
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:iconhitomi97:
Hitomi97 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whaaahhhh!! I want to see the rest now!! QAQ
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:iconmnjooschji:
Mnjooschji Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
but... but what!?! :nuu:
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sawai159 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
I have found out your manga few days ago, and I love it :heart: Good luck with it! ^^
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